The feedback my group were given after our performance was good and helpful.
The feedback that involved me was the ending scene with my character ' Scarlett' and Yunasa's character ' Raymond'. The feedback was to alter the dialogue at the end of our scene, instead of saying 'meet me back here in an hour' after speaking about starting a riot/protest, I personally did not like this line as I felt it didn't quite flow so I am glad that other people felt the same way. We have decided to alter the dialogue and leave a bit open for the audience to wonder what we are going to do next instead of having it planned out by saying 'meet me back here in an hour' me and Yunasa feel this makes the scene more natural and realistic and helps the scene end on an interesting note.
Other feedback we received was about Lucy's character of playing the puppet of the government who watches over everyone and never try's to help them. The audience felt Lucy should make her character more defined and clear, as some people did not quite know what she was supposed to be doing. I think having Lucy play the government's puppet is a great idea to have in theatre and it lets the audiences imagination take over, she just needs to make it a bit more clear and understandable.
The feedback we received was mainly just little tweaks to make it more solid, and I am really happy with my groups performance.
The feedback that involved me was the ending scene with my character ' Scarlett' and Yunasa's character ' Raymond'. The feedback was to alter the dialogue at the end of our scene, instead of saying 'meet me back here in an hour' after speaking about starting a riot/protest, I personally did not like this line as I felt it didn't quite flow so I am glad that other people felt the same way. We have decided to alter the dialogue and leave a bit open for the audience to wonder what we are going to do next instead of having it planned out by saying 'meet me back here in an hour' me and Yunasa feel this makes the scene more natural and realistic and helps the scene end on an interesting note.
Other feedback we received was about Lucy's character of playing the puppet of the government who watches over everyone and never try's to help them. The audience felt Lucy should make her character more defined and clear, as some people did not quite know what she was supposed to be doing. I think having Lucy play the government's puppet is a great idea to have in theatre and it lets the audiences imagination take over, she just needs to make it a bit more clear and understandable.
The feedback we received was mainly just little tweaks to make it more solid, and I am really happy with my groups performance.
What I want to work on, on Monday...
On monday I want to work on the end of mine and Yunasa's scene to make it more natural and add a bit of action and slow motion, I was thinking of having Yunasa's character throwing a brick or a glass bottle onto somebodies car or into a shop window to kickstart the 'rioting' and stay in the freeze-frame, and my character using slow motion techniques for the protest and riot with my fists up high in the air and ending in a freeze-frame also. This will add theatrical suspense and will be interesting for the audience. My group and I have decided on what sound and lighting effects we want in our scenes, which I want us to write down in scene order so we have that completed. I feel we all just need to run through a few more times and tie up any loose ends, as i feel our performance on the whole is pretty much completed! All our characters are very personalised and we all have our own way of walking, body language, talking and individual characteristics. I also feel Yunasa's character could project his voice more and have a more angry attitude in some of the scenes, as he is suffering and unemployed. He shouldn't be so calm about his situation all the time as we are trying to convey just how serious poverty and homelessness is to the audience.
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